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Saturday, October 5, 2013

CWC Plot

But first, this:
I hope I have given you lols. Go read it, it's awesome! http://dragongirlhellfire.deviantart.com/gallery/31624694

So, plot. Some people prefer not to plot out their stories, but come anyways! Once your story is finished, you want to know the elements of a good plot so you can see where you succeeded and where you failed. 
     Two tips on plot, from http://blog.janicehardy.com/2012/05/best-advice-on-plotting-ive-ever-heard.html
are to focus on Cause and Effect.
"When writing out your plot, think in terms of but and therefore. When you’re writing, don’t worry about if a section is a scene or sequel. Think cause and effect, sentence-by-sentence, action to reaction, scene to scene, and you’ll never go wrong."    This tip is a lot like the other one, and is just as helpful.
so, basically I am now just going to list websites and tips. I promise this will make actual sense at the lesson... probably.
This related to plot and character: What is your main characters heart's desire? The plot should stem around this desire. Heart's desires can change, but they cannot be instantly rewritten. If your character really wants a dog, then they will not just walk past free puppies. But if they get a dog and realize how much work they take, your character may change their minds.
     http://writerswrite.co.za/the-top-10-tips-for-plotting-and-finishing-a-book
This website has a few good tips, but I don't like all of them (So I'll leave them out)
1. Write the ending first. It may change in the future, but it's good to have at least a general idea of where you're ending. You don't have to plot before you start your story, but it can be helpful.
2. Choose your antagonist first. This may not apply in all cases. Most of my stories have started out as a character. But you need to develop your villain just as much as you develop your hero. We don't have to like their goals, but we should be fascinated by them, or at least interested.
3. Decide on a genre and stick to it. Don't change from fantasy to romance!! You can have romance elements in a fantasy story, or fantasy elements, but don't start one way and then snap into another. No one will love you and I for one will be thoroughly disappointed. (This happened to me once. No wonder the book was free...)
4. Be disciplined with settings. Do not introduce a brand new setting towards the end of the book. Try to keep to a small number of areas, and if your characters stay in a place for more than a night or if that place has significance in either the plot or their lives, do development behind the scenes that is not necessarily included in the story. Try to stick to around five major settings.
5. Don't include to many characters. You can have a large cast, but most of that cast should function off camera and behind the scenes. They may appear for a few moments, but the main characters of your story should be a small and elite group. Don't use my stories as an example, for example! I have way too many characters, and not only is it hard to keep track of them all, it's hard to give each character the time they need, so many of them can become sorely underdeveloped, while characters who have almost no appearances have tons of development. (This can though, in my opinion, be a good thing. trixie doesn't show up too much, yet when she does the effects are... large, to say the least. And even though you never really know her whole story, you can tell that its there.) If you are going to have multiple points of view, don't have any more than three. It kills all sense of understanding if you have more than that. And I could go on with just this all day, so I'll stop before this gets any longer.
6. Just write the end. It doesn't matter that there's loose ends. Once you end your story, you can go back and look at everything as a whole. But before you even scroll to the top, close your microsoft word program or notebook and don't look at them again for at least two weeks. I've tried it both ways, and if you can force yourself to just leave it alone, completly and totally, you will be much the better for it.

And now I am finally going to shut up. See what happens when I actually prepare?
Br

Saturday, September 21, 2013

Super(ior) Hearts

So, go look to the other pages for fun and random fan-fics. If you read, I promise a future with violence, character development, several meltdowns, romance, and devils. (BWAHAHA!!)

Friday, September 13, 2013

Hi there invisible peoples.
Oh, and mom. You too.
So yeah, I really have nothing to say today...

So I have a sort of idea, about some witches who do stuff (Very much in development) And Jackie, our favorite reaper friend, just got a makeover. And so yeah. Have some pictures:
 Amerilla, Witch of plants
 Bubblegum, Witch of flame
 Illyana, Witch of Ice
 Mirelda, Witch of water

Sunday, August 25, 2013

OMFOUNDERS DILLON COLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

So, I has finally gotten the third and last book of the Star Shards series by Neil Shusterman, but I'm not letting myself start it because I know if i do I'll stay up all night reading it. And it helps that they're school tomorrow and if I don't finish I will not pay attention in class. At all.
Sigh.

In other news, I have started something else new that I will probably never finish. So please help encourage me to get the thing done. http://www.wattpad.com/story/7824041-super-ior-hearts
And please do follow me on wattpad because occasionally I post things that make sense, while here I just... Rant.

Because ranting is fun.

They should seriously make a video for my face when I say that line. Just my face, nothing else.

So what Super(ior) Hearts basically is, is a story about my characters, and what if they were superheroes and supervillans. Of course, Emily Swiftfoot now hates me because I';m both making her be a villain and making her fall in love with Crow again. (Who just happens to be one of the fore-mentioned superheroes. Insert evil laugh here.) And I made the cover myself, and I'm very proud of it. They're all so adorable. Can you guess who they all are?
So yeah, go read that. It's cool. I've gotten really far in how long? Three days? Why much dedication on things I can never actually make money off of? Sigh.

Friday, August 16, 2013

Newbie

So, I'm coming up with new ideas, a lot of which have been listed at the bottom of the page. And the one theme throughout my stories is that the main character is never normal. There always has to be something special about them. So I keep trying to make a normal character, but it just doesn't happen, because really, are any of us normal? I want someone who fits in well, but isn't that just so boring? But it can be interesting. Each of us has so many issues, even if no one else knows about them. We have flaws, and if one were able to just peek in on a life and see every part of it, without anything being hidden, then something could be found. A different way of looking at life may be revealed.

Founders, what was that. Anyway, what I was supposed to be talking about before random inspiration i have two relatively new ideas. The first is something from yesterday, really. It's just an idea to have five witches, each with a specialty, and have them clash and be forced to work together.

The second idea is actually really old. I first made this picture.
At the time I had no idea who she was, and I didn't know for a long time after that. But eventually she gained a name, and a sense that she had a troubled past.
Oh, and the part about how she's an assassin or something. 
So for a long time, the two pictures of The Dragon sat in my hard drive. Then one day I found them again and made a companion picture.
Yeah, big difference. And she's smiling! And after I made this I just couldn't stop thinking about it. So I started writing, and then all at once the folks from Life in The Underworld popped up and I figured out just why her past is so troubled.
She can't remember anything from before her fifteenth birthday. And the stuff that happened after that... Well, that's where the super assassin part comes in.
So now I've got a story with something called a heartless, reapers, devils, skills with a sword, one very spunky... twenty five year old, and one secret organization.
This should be fun...


Tuesday, August 13, 2013

Sunday, August 11, 2013

Not to late...?

So...  I never go on this blog and now I apologize and prep[are to spam you with tons of news about everything.
So. Italy was amazing, and I will post about that, with pictures and fabulous tales and such.
I have finished several drafts of Endron, and I am hoping to get it to the point where people can read into by December at which point I will be 15.
Which is another thing that makes me scream into my pillow for about five hours.
My other stories are going well, but I'm devoting most of my attention to the Endron trilogy. And that's the big hurrah.
And for anyone who cares and knows what I'm talking about, Emily gets to keep Summer.
OH THE FEELS!!!!!!!
And I think that's about it. I'll split the rest of it up into long and probably boring posts.

I love all your faces, nonexistent people!!
(And suddenly I realize I don't just talk to myself, I blog to myself. The trials of an author are never through.)