The 13th hour

So, I have a new idea, and there is practically no structure t the story. Humph.
But maybe you guys (Gals, whatever.) can help me out!!!!
The whole thing was inspired by this picture
Totally awesome. So right now, I have a introduction and a chapter one that needs a ton of work. But it is cool, because it involves the reader. (You walk into the hospital room, you see the little girl, ect. I can't remember what that style is called right now.)
The only other things I have are character ideas, but those are awesome, Because there is Marcel (The one in the picture.) Tok (To ironic he can use time magic.) Clara Shnider (Don't you just love her last name?) Ashlyn (Having fun being in a coma.) and The Hunter. (All together the creepiest robot in their world.)
So, all i know about the plot is that Marcel is dying, Clara is blind and has been kidnapped by someone, The Hunter is hunting something, (What else would he be doing?) Ashlyn's soul is trapped in the real of time, and Tok is trying and failing to make Marcel his girlfriend. Not again with the tangled love life's. Sigh.